The diary of Anne frank
Dear diary. . .
today I went outside and I saw my griffin sleeping on top of my car she woke up and flew over to me and she picked up something next to her and used her beak to place it in my hands I looked at it it was a long thin stick with holes in it I realised it was a flute made of wood it had a beautiful carving of a tree in it it was a golden tree I know how to play the flute so I blew it but then a script of paper fell out as soon ans I blew through it. It was a piece of paper with the notes
I played the notes three times just as the script said suddely I heard a patter of goat hoofs trample in the driveway. I played the flute on last time andhe jumped out it was a faun which is a human half goat I found out that the flute I played was his and that my griffin had taken it when he fell asleep he had lost his way and he took a portal to earth , I looked at my griffin taylor and she was sorry. I returned it to him he told me to rub the golden tree 5 times it would take me anywhere I rubbed it 5 times as I was told , there was silence but suddenly a bright golden circle formed around us and sucked me Billy and Taylor down a black hole. When it stopped i looked around and I found my self in a forest it was a mythical forest . I looked around anything could be found here and there were peoples stuff everywhere billy explained that this was a place of people's lost treausure. I reconized a picture in one of the piles it was a potograph of me with my family but soon I reconized everything in that pile. Suddenly all the piles seemed to pull into the ground without hesitation I grabbed the photograph and I grabbed the flute I rubbed it 5 times ,I grabbed Billy and Taylor and we were once again pulled into a black hole and in a blink of an eye I was back home it was crazy day i was so exhausted I offered Billy to live with me and griffin he said yes we all settled down and ate cookies and slept. Billy slept on the couch and Taylor slept on the carpet I slept on the other couch opposite billy and slept till 4 pm
Hello Milika
ReplyDeleteWOW, that seems like an amazing day! Firstly, I like the words you used to write your story. I think this is a very good blog post and needs no change. You can do this Milika, you are catching up to the finish line. Keep up the amazing job Milika.
-Pao :)
ReplyDeleteTalofa Milika,
Thank you so much for this incredible diary entry! It is so creative and descriptive, I can see you’ve put in a lot of thought and effort into this activity - ka pai! I especially love the bright golden circle part and how the mythical forest was a place of people’s lost treasures. I found it so captivating and could not stop reading once I'd started. I totally agree with Molly - you could definitely make this into a children’s book.
Your story reminded me of my 24th birthday when I threw a mythical forest creatures party! It was so fun and everyone dressed up - there were lots of fairies, trolls, elves, and fauns, and I decorated my house and garden like a mystical forest :)
Thanks for the outstanding post Milika,
Eliza :)
Hello Milika,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag and I am participating gin the Summer Learning Journey this year. I really enjoyed reading this blog post! Let me elaborate on why I like it. Firstly, you gave a lot of information. Secondly, you made the story really interesting. I actually have a diary for 2020. I got it for Christmas and I write i it everyday. Maybe next time you could add a bit of information about what the activity taught you. Overall, this is a phenomenal blog post! Keep up the astonishing work!
Vitaraag